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The most difficult thing about learning English is the order of speaking in English.Because English and Korean have different word order.It is difficult to arrange English sentences in order when they are long, and it is also difficult to find the right words when they have to be expressed in English

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Hi Jeny,

I wanted to tell you how impressed I am with your assignment and the effort you're putting into learning English. I know it's not easy, especially when it comes to the order of words and expressing yourself accurately. The difference in word order between English and Korean can indeed make it difficult to arrange sentences properly, especially when they are long. Additionally, finding the right words to convey your thoughts in English can be a real challenge. But I want you to know that I am seeing progress in your English skills. I truly believe in your ability to get better at English. With continued practice, patience, and a positive attitude, you'll keep improving. Don't let the challenges stop you. Embrace them as opportunities to grow and learn. Keep up the great work, and never hesitate to ask for help or guidance whenever you need it.

~Teacher Cathy

 

The most difficult thing about learning English is the order of speaking in English.

>>CORRECT

OR>> The hardest part of learning English is the order of words when speaking.

Because English and Korean have different word order.

>> It can be difficult because English and Korean have different word order rules.

It is difficult to arrange English sentences in order when they are long, and it is also difficult to find the right words when they have to be expressed in English

>> CORRECT

OR>> English sentences are challenging to organize properly, especially when they are long. It's also tough to find the right words to express thoughts in English.

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