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I like everything except writing.
Reading is good because I can experience various things.
I can be a diver, an astronaut, a small animal or a part of nature, talking is good because I can speak my thoughts, and listening is good because I can know the thoughts of various people.

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Hello Da Hye,

Great job on completing your homework! I appreciate all your hard work. It's wonderful to hear that you enjoy reading. Reading allows you to explore different worlds and experience exciting things like being a diver, an astronaut, or even a small animal. Speaking your thoughts is also fantastic because it helps you express yourself. Listening is valuable too because it lets you understand the perspectives of different people. Keep up the excellent work!   

~Teacher Cathy

 

I like everything except writing.

>>CORRECT

Reading is good because I can experience various things.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Reading is enjoyable as it allows me to explore a lot of experiences and perspectives.

I can be a diver, an astronaut, a small animal or a part of nature, talking is good because I can speak my thoughts, and listening is good because I can know the thoughts of various people.

>> I can be a diver, an astronaut, a small animal, or a part of nature. Talking is good because I can speak my thoughts, and listening is good as well because I can know the thoughts of various people.

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