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회원님의 영작문

Hi.
It's rainy outside, cats and dogs.
I can't see the outside through the window because of much rain.
Of course, there was only a few patients at the clinic.
You know what?
It's more tired for me to see a few patients than many patients.
I always have a gratitude for my patients, though.
Anyway, I will see my patient with my best.
Water leakage problem at the ceiling seems to be complicated.
After discussion, I asked the upper floor interior boss to contact their insurance.
I am a kind of peaceful man, so I don't want more conflicts between them and me.
As for my political view, I quite support the right wing.
There is no perfect politics, I guess.
I met many people who support left wing, and most of them turned out to be liars or irreasonable or illogical.
Left wing theory is based on equality and affection, I guess.
In fact, most people want better lives than others.
So, it is impossible to satisfy all people like the concept of left wing.
Maybe it's possible in heaven.
See you.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

You are incredible, Dr. Kim! You were able to discuss various topics in one composition. Thank you for sharing your thoughts! See you!-Faith-
Hi.
>> Hi, Faith.
It's rainy outside, cats and dogs.
>> It's raining cats and dogs outside.
I can't see the outside through the window because of much rain.
>> I can't see the outside of the building through the window because of much rain.
Of course, there was only a few patients at the clinic.
>> CORRECT
You know what? 
It's more tired for me to see a few patients than many patients.
>> Honestly, it's more tiring for me to see a few patients than many.
I always have a gratitude for my patients, though.
>> I always have a gratitude to my patients, though.
Anyway, I will see my patient with my best.
>> Anyway, I will see my patients with my best.
Water leakage problem at the ceiling seems to be complicated.
>> The water leakage problem at the ceiling seems to be complicated.
After discussion, I asked the upper floor interior boss to contact their insurance.
>> After our discussion, I asked the upper floor interior boss to contact their insurance.
I am a kind of peaceful man, so I don't want more conflicts between them and me.
>> CORRECT
As for my political view, I quite support the right wing.
>> CORRECT
There is no perfect politics, I guess.
>> CORRECT
I met many people who support left wing, and most of them turned out to be liars or irreasonable or illogical.
>> I met many people who support left wing, and most of them turned out to be liars or unreasonable or illogical.
Left wing theory is based on equality and affection, I guess.
>> CORRECT
In fact, most people want better lives than others.
>> CORRECT
So, it is impossible to satisfy all people like the concept of left wing.
>> Therefore, it is impossible to satisfy all people who like the concept of left wing.
Maybe it's possible in heaven.
>> CORRECT
See you.
>> CORRECT
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