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Children can grow up with confidence and ownership if they try hard enough and have the experience of failure and success.
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Good afternoon Ms. Sunny~!^^ How's your day going? I appreciate your effort on doing your homework. Keep it up!
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Children can grow up with confidence and ownership if they try hard enough and have the experience of failure and success.
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However, they can be focused on achieving perfection and avoiding the risk depending on their character.
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