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I helped someone.

작성자: 강*수
2024-02-23 61

회원님의 영작문

I helped someone last year, but it was a very small thing. it was when I traveled to Japan. I went to a tourist attraction. and I saw a glove on the ground. it looked like someone lost. so I picked it up and looked around to find its owner. After a few minutes, I saw a girl who had a glove that looks like the other pair that I found. As expected, she was the owner of the gloves, so she said thank you to me. and I noticed she was korean. At that moment, I felt proud that I found the owner and helped someone who is same nationality in another country.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey Iris! It's amazing how you were able to help someone with this little gesture. I hope you get to help more people in your own ways.
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I helped someone last year, but it was a very small thing.
>> Last year, I had the opportunity to lend a helping hand, albeit in a small way.

it was when I traveled to Japan. I went to a tourist attraction. and I saw a glove on the ground.
>> During my travels in Japan, while visiting a popular tourist spot, I noticed a lone glove lying on the ground, seemingly misplaced and abandoned. 

it looked like someone lost. so I picked it up and looked around to find its owner.
>> Instinctively, I picked it up, driven by the desire to reunite it with its rightful owner.

After a few minutes, I saw a girl who had a glove that looks like the other pair that I found.
>> After a brief search, my efforts paid off when I spotted a young girl who happened to be holding the matching glove.

As expected, she was the owner of the gloves, so she said thank you to me. and I noticed she was korean.
>>  As I approached her, it became apparent that she was Korean, just like myself. 

At that moment, I felt proud that I found the owner and helped someone who is same nationality in another country.

>> In that moment, a sense of pride washed over me as I realized I had not only returned a lost item but also extended a helping gesture to someone from my own nationality in a foreign land.




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