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I always take a break on the weekend.
Of course, I work on Saturday, but I can rest after work.
And I also have Sunday, so It's a very good day.

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Hi Yun Da Hye, 

It's great to hear you have time to relax and recharge on the weekends, even if you have to work on Saturdays. Balancing work and rest is so important for our well-being. Keep enjoying your favorite days! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I always take a break on the weekend. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I always take time off on the weekends. 

Of course, I work on Saturday, but I can rest after work. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Certainly, I do work on Saturdays, but I can relax afterward. 

And I also have Sunday, so It's a very good day. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>And I also have Sunday off, so it's a great day. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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