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I don't feel inferior in front of forigners.
I am only ashamed to speak English to others.
I think they know my English is wrong.
Of course It is natural Korean can't speak english.
But people who know me can consider why do I can't speak english although I've been learning english for over 13years.
I agree with them.
That is my barrier not to have confidence to foreigners.

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Hi Ms. Sunny!
I am proud to hear that you don't feel inferior in front of foreigners, however, your feelings shouldn't discriminate your ability. Whether you are fluent or not in English. Did you know that Western People have higher expectations of Filipinos, to be honest, not all Filipinos are fluent in English but they try to speak to a foreigner especially if they need help.
Be proud :)
Aki~

I don't feel inferior in front of foreigners.
>>> CORRECT!

I am only ashamed to speak English to others.
>>> I am only embarrassed to speak English with them.

I think they know my English is wrong.
>>> CORRECT!

Of course It is natural Korean can't speak English.
>>> Of course It is natural for Koreans not to speak English.

But people who know me can consider why do I can't speak english although I've been learning English for over 13years.
>>> But people who know me may say why can't I speak English although I've been learning English for over 13 years?

I agree with them.
>>> CORRECT!

That is my barrier not to have confidence to foreigners.
>>>  That is my barrier to having confidence in foreigners.
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