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2025-01-15 1944

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1. Edison had become totally deaf at the time he turned fifteen.
2. Sun¡¯s heat and lightning are the two natural causes of wildfires.
3. The huge popularity of the twenty-20 cricket can be attributed to the establishment of the Indian Premier League.
4. Many players have been accused of fixing matches.
5. Many environmentalists have raised concerns over the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches.

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Hello Yumin!!!

I also enjoy talking with you!! Keep it up!!!

I do believe that you can improve your skills in English. I recommend that you should focus on our daily lessons son that you can be successful in achieving your goals.

We need to develop all of our skills in studying English but the most important thing is believe in yourself. You can to do it!!!

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1. Edison had become totally deaf at the time he turned fifteen.
>>Edison had become totally deaf by the time he turned fifteen.
2. Sun¡¯s heat and lightning are the two natural causes of wildfires.
>>Correct
3. The huge popularity of the twenty-20 cricket can be attributed to the establishment of the Indian Premier League.
>>Correct
4. Many players have been accused of fixing matches.
>>Correct
5. Many environmentalists have raised concerns over the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches.
>>Many environmentalists have raised concerns about the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches.
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