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1. My mom shout at me.because ¤Óforgot the my homework.
2.I shout at my brother. Him breaked my phone.
3. My sister shout at the player games.

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Hi, Michelle!
Thank you for doing your homework. Just to clarify, we use 'shout at' when we are talking about the present or something that usually happens. However, in your sentences, the events happened in the past, so we use 'shouted at.' Let's practice more in class later.
- T. Caitlyn 
1. My mom shout at me.because ¤Óforgot the my homework.
>> My mom shouted at me because I forgot my homework.
2. I shout at my brother. Him breaked my phone.
>> I shouted at my brother because he broke my phone.
3. My sister shout at the player games.
>> My sister shouts at the player in the game.
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