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Q : Can you think of a time when you stood by someone-or someone stood by you-through thick and thin? What was the situation, and how did it affect your relationship? Describe your experience in detail.

A : Yes, i can.
My best friend was undergoing lack of a money.
He needed urgent money but he can`t raise the money.
At that time, i lent the money to him.
By that money, he can deal with his problem and we are still best friend.

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Hello Eddy!

Your answer is great because it shows your kindness and loyalty as a friend! Helping someone during their difficult time is not easy, but you stood by your friend when they really needed support. That shows your strong character.

To make your response even better, you could add a little more detail about how this experience affected your friendship. For example, did your bond become stronger? Did your friend do something special to show their gratitude? Small details like that can make your answer feel even more personal and heartfelt.

You're doing really well! Keep up the great work, and let¡¯s keep polishing your answers together.

~Teacher Cathy

 

Yes, i can. My best friend was undergoing lack of a money.

>>Yes, I can. My best friend was experiencing a lack of money.

He needed urgent money but he can`t raise the money.

>>He urgently needed money, but he couldn't raise it.

At that time, i lent the money to him.

>>CORRECT

OR>>At that time, I lent him the money.

By that money, he can deal with his problem and we are still best friend.

>>With that money, he was able to solve his problem, and we are still best friends.

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