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I had a lot of chances to draw. But I didn't have luck of the draw. We give chances to draw when during the event. For example local festival, supermarket opening, year-end and new years event etc. I have never got it. But I had only won once. I did survey about leisure life. This survey had giveaway. But I did it and forgot. After one month I received text, I won the second prize. I wonter that it is spam message. So I check it, it was realize. I was so happy and got a iPad. But I had to pay tax. This is only my draw experlience. Ah! this iPad my husband using well yet.

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Ms. Eva!
What a great story! I'm really happy to hear you had a chance to win. It reminded me of my last win, which happened during the pandemic. It was just a small raffle, and the prize was a bucket of chicken—and I actually won!
But right before that, something stressful happened. A boy entered our house without permission, and our dog bit him. I ended up having to pay for his anti-rabies injection, which was frustrating since he came in uninvited. I was feeling pretty upset at the time.
Then, just as I got home, the person in charge of the raffle called me to say I had won. They handed me the bucket of chicken, and honestly, it made my day. It might sound small, but at that moment, it felt like one of the biggest wins ever. Hahaha
Aki~

I had a lot of chances to draw.
>>>  I had many opportunities to join the raffle.

But I didn't have luck of the draw.
>>> But I didn't have the luck of the draw.

We give chances to draw when during the event.
>>>  We got chances to participate in the draw during the event.

For example local festival, supermarket opening, year-end and new years event etc.
>>> For example, in local festivals, supermarket opening, year-end, and New Year's events, etc.

I have never got it. But I had only won once.
>>> I have never gotten it, but I had only won once.

I did survey about leisure life. This survey had giveaway.
>>> I did a survey about leisure life, and it has a giveaway.


But I did it and forgot. After one month I received text, I won the second prize.
>>>  But I did it and forgot. After one month, I received a text that I won the second prize.

I wonter that it is spam message. So I check it, it was realize. I was so happy and got a iPad. But I had to pay tax.
>>>  I wonder if it is a spam message. So I checked it and it was real I was so happy and got an iPad. But I had to pay the tax.

This is only my draw experlience. Ah! this iPad my husband using well yet.
>>>  This is only my experience.  Ah!  my husbadn is using the IPad well.

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