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Do you think students today face more academic pressure than in the past? Why or why not?

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I think students today are exposed to more academic pressure than in the past. There are two main reasons that support this view. The first is systemic change in education. In the past, high school students were only required to prepare for the CSAT. However, since new policies were introduced by the Ministry of Education in Korea for university admission in 2010, various pathways for application have emerged . Hence, many students today must organize and prepare for multiple components such as the CSAT, midterm and final exams, performance assessments and extracurricular activities. These complex requirements have significantly increased their academic pressure and confusion. Secondly, another key factor is industrial advancement. With the rise of the Fourth Industrial Revolution, students in STEM fields are required to possess deeper academic knowledge to handle advanced industries such as AI, automation systems and semiconductors.

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Hi Isaac!
Thank you for your diligence.
I always admire that about you.
I hope you can continue practicing and developing yourself more.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think students today are exposed to more academic pressure than in the past. 
>> Correct
There are two main reasons that support this view. 
>> Correct
The first is systemic change in education. 
>> Correct
In the past, high school students were only required to prepare for the CSAT. 
>> Correct
However, since new policies were introduced by the Ministry of Education in Korea for university admission in 2010, various pathways for application have emerged . 
>> Correct
Hence, many students today must organize and prepare for multiple components such as the CSAT, midterm and final exams, performance assessments and extracurricular activities.
>> Correct 
These complex requirements have significantly increased their academic pressure and confusion. 
>> Correct
Secondly, another key factor is industrial advancement. 
>> Correct
With the rise of the Fourth Industrial Revolution, students in STEM fields are required to possess deeper academic knowledge to handle advanced industries such as AI, automation systems and semiconductors.
>> Correct
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