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HOMEWORK: Is it better to get married or remain single for the rest of your life?

I think it would be better to get married than to live single. This is because you can get comfort mentally and living together has much better things than living alone.
Of course, it costs a lot of money and there are many problems and disputes, but it can be an opportunity to grow and develop further through it.
Scientifically, one of the great benefits of being able to leave one's own genes by giving birth to one's own child is also one of the great benefits.

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Hello, Alex!
Although most Koreans nowadays are not interested in marriage because of its high costs, I¡¯m happy to hear your different opinion. ^^
Chammy
I think it would be better to get married than to live single. 
OR
>> I believe that getting married is preferable to being single.
This is because you can get comfort mentally and living together has much better things than living alone.
>> This is because living together provides mental comfort and has more advantages than living alone.
Of course, it costs a lot of money, and there are many problems and disputes, but it can be an opportunity to grow and develop further through it.
OR
>> Of course, it is costly, and there are many problems and disputes, but it may also be an opportunity to grow and develop.

Scientifically, one of the great benefits of being able to leave one's own genes by giving birth to one's own child is also one of the great benefits.
OR
>> One big benefit of having your own child is that you can pass on your genes, which is scientifically important.
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