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Talk about your best memory from a holiday.

한다연/2025-02-04

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My best memory from a holiday is a Japanese journey with my family last year. Because it was a journey after a long interval. My older sister and I went out of a hometown house. So my family didn't spend much time together. When we went to Japanese, I could eat delicious food and see a beautiful scenery. But the most good thing was having a talking time with my family. It was a really healing time just with them.
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Hello Nicole!
It's so nice to read about your best memory from a trip. Thank you for sharing to me! See you next time! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

My best memory from a holiday is a Japanese journey with my family last year. Because it was a journey after a long interval.
>>My best memory from a holiday is a trip to Japan with my family last year,
because it was our first trip together after a long time.
My older sister and I went out of a hometown house. So my family didn't spend much time together.
>>My older sister and I had moved out of our hometown house, so my family didn’t spend much time together.
When we went to Japanese, I could eat delicious food and see a beautiful scenery.
>>When we went to Japan, I was able to eat delicious food and see beautiful scenery.
But the most good thing was having a talking time with my family.
>>But the best thing was having time to talk with my family.
It was a really healing time just with them.
>>It was really a healing time, just being with them.
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