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What is the most important political event in your country so far?

윤재웅/2025-08-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Definitely, the most important and recent political event is the impeachment of former president Yoon. This causes social division in South Korea The impeachment is still controversial subjects among people so we are still angry and sensitive to politics. That's why it is hard to discuss and speak out our own opinions. Because of impeachment, the president election has run earlier than we expect so still the atmosphere is confused in Korea politics. The time of verifying candidates was too short(election period was too short), so many people has worries.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Jake! Have a good day.

Definitely, the most important and recent political event is the impeachment of former president Yoon.

>> Definitely, the most important and recent political event is the impeachment of former President Yoon.

This causes social division in South Korea

>> This has caused social division in South Korea.

The impeachment is still controversial subjects among people so we are still angry and sensitive to politics.

>> The impeachment is still a controversial subject among the people, so many of us remain angry and sensitive about politics.

That's why it is hard to discuss and speak out our own opinions.

>> That’s why it’s hard to discuss or speak openly about our opinions.

Because of impeachment, the president election has run earlier than we expect so still the atmosphere is confused in Korea politics.

>> Because of the impeachment, the presidential election was held earlier than expected, so the political atmosphere in Korea is still confused.
The time of verifying candidates was too short(election period was too short), so many people has worries.

>> The time for verifying candidates was too short, so many people are worried.