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Write your own version of spider man.

차진혁/2025-02-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I own version of spider man is original spider man because I always watch the original spider man. So I'm attached to it.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. See you later! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                       

                           
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I own version of spider man is original spider man because I always watch the original spider man. So I'm attached to it.
>> My own version of Spiderman is the original one because I always watch it so I'm attached to it. 

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