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이영숙/2025-02-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

1. I am happy when I go to Korea. 2.I am happy when I decorate to my garden. 3. I feel happy when i eat delicious food and(with?)nice restaurant. 4. I am happy when my family enjoy eat food I make.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Michelle!

It's nice to know that there are a lot of things that make you happy. Great job with your homework, just take note of the minor corrections. You can do it!

- T. Caitlyn

1. I am happy when I go to Korea.

>> CORRECT
2.I am happy when I decorate to my garden.

>> I am happy when I decorate my garden.
3. I feel happy when i eat delicious food and(with?)nice restaurant.

>> I feel happy when I eat delicious food at a nice restaurant.
4. I am happy when my family enjoy eat food I make.

>> I am happy when my family enjoys the food I make.