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No, I don’t have stuffed toys until now.

유수빈/2025-02-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No, I don’t have stuffed toys until now. But, I saw the pictures when I was 7 years old. In many pictures, I had a rabbit doll with wear the green and white stripe T-shirts. The doll is as tall as me, so I think that I thought the doll as a friend.
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Hi Kara! 

I used to love stuffed animals. 
Until now, I still have a few of them. 
I like sleeping with them because they are so fluffy. 

Andrea 

No, I don’t have stuffed toys until now.
>> No, I no longer have stuffed toys now. 

But, I saw the pictures when I was 7 years old. In many pictures, I had a rabbit doll with wear the green and white stripe T-shirts.
>> I saw pictures when I was 7 years old, I had a rabbit doll with a green and white striped shirt. 

The doll is as tall as me, so I think that I thought the doll as a friend.
>> The doll is as tall as me, so I think that I thought the doll was a friend.
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