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Are there pickpockets in your country? Write about pickpocketing in Korea.

차유진/2025-05-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The pickpockets no in the my country don't get pickpockets if leave the phone but my country have many bicycle thieves.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your second corrected composition, Yale.  Please go over the revisions given below. See you tomorrow and have a good night's sleep!   


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                              Are there pickpockets in your country? Write about pickpocketing in Korea.


The pickpockets no in the my country don't get pickpockets if leave the phone but my country have many bicycle thieves.
>>> There are no pickpockets in my country. You won’t get pickpocketed if you leave your phone unattended, but my country does have many bicycle thieves.
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