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What are effective ways to keep our minds sharp as we age? Do you have any habits or activities that

이진태/2025-02-06

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I usually watch comedy show when I want to reduce my stress and keep mental health. That makes me just fun without no concern.
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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I usually watch comedy show when I want to reduce my stress and keep mental health.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I often watch comedy shows to relieve stress and take care of my mental health.

That makes me just fun without no concern.
>> It simply makes me happy without any worries. 
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