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What makes something special?

이복희/2025-04-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think that mind makes something special. When I accept something, my attitude is changed. Before it was not special, now it is aspecial. When I started to learn English, English become special for me. Before English was just foreign langague, now it become a my goal. I open watch youtube, I subscribe English contents. When I heard word that I didn't know it's mean, I just serch dictionary. I think that to learn English very fun, but to make sentence in English very hard. I will study more hard for improve my English level.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Ms. Eva!

That is true. It is we who make something special. A simple stone may be special to someone, but not to everybody.

It is how we accept and visualize things and people should not judge another person because of it.

Aki~

I think that mind makes something special.

>>> I think that the mind makes something special.

When I accept something, my attitude is changed.

>>> When I accept something, my attitude changes.

Before it was not special, now it is aspecial.

>>> It used to be not special.

When I started to learn English, English become special for me.

>>> When I started learning English, it became special to me.

Before English was just foreign langague, now it become a my goal.

>>> Before, English was just a foreign language; now it has become my goal.

I open watch youtube, I subscribe English contents.

>>> I often watch YouTube and subscribe to English content.

When I heard word that I didn't know it's mean, I just serch dictionary.

>>> Whenever I hear a word that I don't know it's meaning, I just look it up in the dictionary.

I think that to learn English very fun, but to make sentence in English very hard.

>>> I think that to learn English is very fun, but making sentences in English is very hard.

I will study more hard for improve my English level.

>>> I will study harder to improve my English level.