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양기연/2025-04-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I like to get oil massage. I have received coconut oil massage several times when I traveled to Thailand for the first time. After the experience, I try to get coconut massage when traveling to Asian countries.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Gi Yean!
Thank you for sharing with me what you usually use for massages. It's the same in my country! A lot of people use coconut oil for massages, especially for fractures or sprains, since it has anti-inflammatory properties.
- T. Caitlyn 
I like to get oil massage. 
>> I like to get oil massages.
I have received coconut oil massage several times when I traveled to Thailand for the first time. 
>> I received coconut oil massages several times when I traveled to Thailand for the first time.
After the experience, I try to get coconut massage when traveling to Asian countries.
>> After the experience, I try to get coconut oil massages when traveling to Asian countries.
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