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What is your favorite novel? Why?

이진태/2025-04-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I didn't read many novel. because I read more another book such as a textbook. Anyway, I rember a novel "Harry Portter" series. When I was a child, this book was very famous in the world. I also read and watched movies.
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Hi! 

Thank you for sharing your answer about your favorite novel. 
It was really nice to know about it. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I didn't read many novel. because I read more another book such as a textbook.
>> I haven’t read many novels because I read other books more such as textbooks.

Anyway, I rember a novel "Harry Portter" series.
>> Anyway, I remember the "Harry Potter" series.

When I was a child, this book was very famous in the world.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It was a worldwide sensation when I was a child.

I also read and watched movies.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I read the series and watched all the movies, too.
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