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The homework for 24th April.

조윤호/2025-04-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q : What are some of the things that you do not give as gifts in your country? A : For me, thats are flower, clothes and perfume. Since i preper giving a present that receivers want, i always ask to them "which present do you want ?". But if they do not told me, i avoid clothes and perfume because these items can be prefered or not prefered person by person. Also, i do not give a flower because it is very awkward to me even though girlfriend.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Eddy!
Those are interesting choice for gifts! And I agree with the part where you said it's better to ask the person what they want. Thank you for your time and effort this week! See you next week!
~~Teacher Kate 

For me, thats are flower, clothes and perfume. 
>>For me, those are flowers, clothes, and perfume. 
Since i preper giving a present that receivers want, i always ask to them "which present do you want ?".
>>Since I prefer giving a present that the receiver wants, I always ask them, "Which present do you want?"
But if they do not told me, i avoid clothes and perfume because these items can be prefered or not prefered person by person.
>>But if they don't tell me, I avoid clothes and perfume because these items can be preferred or not preferred depending on the person.
Also, i do not give a flower because it is very awkward to me even though girlfriend.
>>Also, I do not give flowers because it feels very awkward to me, even with a girlfriend. 








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