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What are some of the most interesting or unusual things you've seen or experienced while traveling?

임주미/2025-04-26

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while traveling in Bolivia, I rode our jeep around the sand desert. I take a boad on the sand, there are only sand and a hill foarmed by sand. It feels like a ride.It was amazig and scaried. I 've never seen before, It was funny too.

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Hello Grace, thank you for doing the assignment! I've never been to Bolivia, but your story made it interesting. The experience must be so unique to you! :)
~ T. Ezra
while traveling in Bolivia, I rode our jeep around the sand desert.
>> CORRECT
Or >> During my trip to Bolivia, I drove our jeep across a vast sand desert.
I take a boad on the sand, there are only sand and a hill foarmed by sand.
>> I took a board on the sand; there was only sand and a hill formed by sand.
It feels like a ride.It was amazig and scaried.
>> It felt like a ride. It was amazing and scary.
I 've never seen that before, It was funny too.
>> I had never seen anything like it before. It was funny too.