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Pencil is important to everyone.
유수빈/2025-04-28
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Pencil is important to everyone.
It's particularly effective when I write down things that need to be modified on paper.
So, I use it when I sketch, and write down my idea that comes to mind.
Therefore, pencil is essential to people's life.
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Hi Kara!^
Andrea
It's particularly effective when I write down things that need to be modified on paper.
So, I use it when I sketch, and write down my idea that comes to mind.
Pencil is indeed a thing that everyone had used.
It is the one that we used when we started to write.
Andrea
Pencil is important to everyone.
>> Correct
It's particularly effective when I write down things that need to be modified on paper.
>> Correct
So, I use it when I sketch, and write down my idea that comes to mind.
>> So, I use it when I sketch and write down my idea that comes to mind.
Therefore, pencil is essential to people's life.
>> Therefore, a pencil is essential to people's life.
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