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What's the weirdest pet you've ever heard of?

차진혁/2025-05-04

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I think the weirdest pet you've ever heard of is my brother because my brother is always use my computer. And my brother is very weirdest.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. Happy Children's Day to you and Yale. Enjoy the rest of the holiday!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What's the weirdest pet you've ever heard of?

I think the weirdest pet you've ever heard of is my brother because my brother is always use my computer. And my brother is very weirdest.

>> I think the weirdest pet I've ever heard of is my brother because he always uses my computer, and he is the weirdest.

>> NOTE: The thought was a bit weird because we're talking about a pet, and your brother isn't one.