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권경희/2025-08-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Comparing North Korea and China, North Korea is more primitive and vicious dictatorship. North Korea is very unique country that keep hereditary system. Of course China is communism and there is a communist party in the center of power. I think that North Korea will not give up hereditary political system .

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Ms. Lily!

Indeed, a political power. Who would give up such luxury of letting people follow a person, and no one dares to oppose the leadership?

These are the fears of the Kims that once they open their country, their wrong practices will be exposed.

See you in class!

Aki~

Comparing North Korea and China, North Korea is more primitive and vicious dictatorship.

>>> Comparing North Korea and China, North Korea is a more primitive and vicious dictatorship.

North Korea is very unique country that keep hereditary system.

>>> North Korea is a very unique country that keeps a hereditary system.

Of course China is communism and there is a communist party in the center of power.

>>> Of course, China is communist, and there is a communist party in the center of power.

I think that North Korea will not give up hereditary political system.

>>> I think that North Korea will not give up its hereditary political system.