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How will you leave a legacy in your community?

이복희/2025-05-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't want to leave a legacy. I don't have enough property. I want to spend my money for me and my husband. I want to spend some money for my son's and grandchildren. Life isn't long, I have to try to be fun and happy. I want to be comfortable old age. I don't want to depend my son's. So we are preparing a lot of things. We prepared insurance, work out everydays, study English. I don't want leave any legacy. Oh! what I leave is my funeral expense.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good afternoon, Ms. Eva!
Legacy means something that is handed down or left behind from the past. It can refer to:
1. A person's impact or achievements - for example, "Her legacy is the school she built for the community."
2. Money or property left to someone in a will.
3. Cultural or historical influence - like "the legacy of ancient Rome."
See you in class!
Aki~


I don't want to leave a legacy.
>>  CORRECT!

I don't have enough property.
>>  CORRECT!

I want to spend my money for me and my husband.
>>  CORRECT!

I want to spend some money for my son's and grandchildren.
>> I want to spend some money on my son's and grandchildren.

Life isn't long, I have to try to be fun and happy.
>> I want to be comfortable in old age.

I don't want to depend my son's. So we are preparing a lot of things.
>>  I don't want to depend on my sons, so we are preparing a lot of things.

We prepared insurance, work out everydays, study English.
>>  We prepared insurance, work out every day, and study English.

I don't want leave any legacy. Oh! what I leave is my funeral expense.
>>> I don't want to leave any legacy. Oh! What I leave is my funeral expenses.
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