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To change my husband's decision

양기연/2025-05-08

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If I want to persuade my husband to change his decision, I first try to have a mild discussion. When the discussion doesn't work, I sometimes give paper letters. Nowadays I text. Occasionally I take him to nice restaurant and recommend to drink some wine. Alcohol is good for relaxing and relieving his condition. When he drinks, he is a little open to other opinions.
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Hi, Gi Yean!
I can see that you really know your husband well because you were able to provide different strategies to persuade him. I think it goes to show that certain situations can help you convince him.
- T. Caitlyn 
If I want to persuade my husband to change his decision, I first try to have a mild discussion. 
>> CORRECT
When the discussion doesn't work, I sometimes give paper letters. 
>> When the discussion doesn't work, I sometimes write letters on paper.
Nowadays I text. 
>> CORRECT
Occasionally I take him to nice restaurant and recommend to drink some wine. 
>> Occasionally, I take him to a nice restaurant and recommend that he drink some wine.
Alcohol is good for relaxing and relieving his condition. 
>> Alcohol is good for relaxation and relieving stress.
When he drinks, he is a little open to other opinions.
>> CORRECT
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