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Indi film

양기연/2025-05-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think that most noncommercial movie directors have difficulty in attracting investors in the phase of making movies. After they produce movies, they have to find accessible cinemas or theaters. They would not be successful if they couldn't have strong distributors. Fortunately, there are small cinemas that release noncommercial movies such as independent movies , documentaries, or artistic movies. Of course, the number of those kinds of cinemas is small, but we can have opportunities to see various kinds of films.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Gi Yean!
I completely agree with you. To be honest, this is one of the reasons why I am very hesitant about watching indie films. I know that most of the time they lack budget and support, so sometimes the quality of the film is compromised, even when the story is really good. It's just nice to know that you support these types of industries.
- T. Caitlyn 
I think that most noncommercial movie directors have difficulty in attracting investors in the phase of making movies. 
>> CORRECT
After they produce movies, they have to find accessible cinemas or theaters. 
>> CORRECT
They would not be successful if they couldn't have strong distributors. 
>> CORRECT
Fortunately, there are small cinemas that release noncommercial movies such as independent movies , documentaries, or artistic movies. 
>> Fortunately, there are small cinemas that show noncommercial movies, such as independent films, documentaries, or artistic films.
Of course, the number of those kinds of cinemas is small, but we can have opportunities to see various kinds of films.
>> Of course, the number of such cinemas is small, but we still have opportunities to see a variety of films.
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