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What do you think about school field trips to the Blue House, the President's Office, and the presi

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I think about school field trips the blue house is good because some students dream of president but I think most elementary school student don't want going to blue house because most students not interested in the president.
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        What do you think about school field trips to the Blue House, the President's Office? 


I think about school field trips the blue house is good because some students dream of president but I think most elementary school student don't want going to blue house because most students not interested in the president.
>> I think the Blue House is a good destination for school field trips because some students dream of becoming president. However, I believe most elementary school students don't want to visit the Blue House since they are not very interested in the president.
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