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김우인/2025-05-14

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I heard about dreams that foretell future before, and I practically believed it when I was young. However, as I learned about the causes that create dreams in my high school, I began to distrust the foretelling ability of future. In high school, I learned that dream is some kind of illusion that is made in the process of our brain transferring short-term memories to long-term memories. But exact process of dream formation during this shift is not yet discovered. This uncertainty is a point that still leaves me tiny bit of belief that dreams might foretell the future. I hope I could experience one of the foretelling dreams, since I've never experienced in my whole life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! The idea of experiencing a foretelling dream is intriguing! Even though science suggests that dreams are mostly related to memory consolidation, it’s still hard to shake the feeling that there could be something more to them.

-T. Sonny
I heard about dreams that foretell future before, and I practically believed it when I was young.

>>I heard about dreams that foretell the future before, and I genuinely believed in them when I was young.

However, as I learned about the causes that create dreams in my high school, I began to distrust the foretelling ability of future.

>>However, as I learned about the causes of dreams in high school, I began to doubt their ability to predict the future.

In high school, I learned that dream is some kind of illusion that is made in the process of our brain transferring short-term memories to long-term memories.

>>In high school, I learned that a dream is a kind of illusion created during the process of the brain transferring short-term memories to long-term memories.

But exact process of dream formation during this shift is not yet discovered.

>>But the exact process of how dreams are formed during this shift is still not fully understood.

This uncertainty is a point that still leaves me tiny bit of belief that dreams might foretell the future.

>>This uncertainty is what still leaves me with a tiny bit of belief that dreams might foretell the future.
I hope I could experience one of the foretelling dreams, since I've never experienced in my whole life.

>>I hope I can experience one of those foretelling dreams someday, since I never have in my life.