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김순님/2025-05-14

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My best obstacle of learning english was fear. I couldn't speak english in front of foreigners even Koreans. I didn't want to make a mistake to others. But you made me confident to speak english. I think if you were a korean I wouldn't have been confident like this. Of course there were a lot of help you gave. It is fortune I am learning english to you. Thank you Aki~~
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Hello, Ms. Sunny!
I am grateful that you appreciate your class with me. It motivates me as well to give my best to teach you. THANK YOU  ^^
Aki~

My best obstacle of learning english was fear.
>>> My best obstacle to learning English was fear.

I couldn't speak english in front of foreigners even Koreans.
>>> I couldn't speak English in front of foreigners, even Koreans.

I didn't want to make a mistake to others.
>>> Because I don't want to make mistakes in front of others.

But you made me confident to speak English.
>>> CORRECT!

I think if you were a korean I wouldn't have been confident like this.
>>> I think if you were Korean, I wouldn't have been confident like this.

Of course there were a lot of help you gave.
>>> Of course, you've given me a lot of help.

It is fortune I am learning english to you.
>>> It is fortunate that I am learning English from you.

Thank you, Aki~~
>>> CORRECT!
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