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The homework for 14th May.

조윤호/2025-05-14

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Q : What’s the most boring thing you have to do? A : It is a definitely working. If i have a lot of money and i don`t need to work, i would not go out and always stay at home. It is terrible that i have to work 9 a.m. to 6 p.m. on every weekdays. So, my goal is earning a lot of money so that i don`t need to work.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eddy!

Thank you for your effort and honest thoughts! You expressed your ideas clearly. Just a quick tip: watch verb tenses (like “If I had…” for imaginary situations) and article use (like “every weekday” instead of “every weekdays”). Keep it up! you’re improving!

~~Teacher Kate

It is a definitely working.

>>It is definitely working.

If i have a lot of money and i don`t need to work, i would not go out and always stay at home.

>>If I had a lot of money and didn’t need to work, I would not go out and would always stay at home.

It is terrible that i have to work 9 a.m. to 6 p.m. on every weekdays.

>>It is terrible that I have to work from 9 a.m. to 6 p.m. every weekday.

So, my goal is earning a lot of money so that i don`t need to work.

>>So, my goal is to earn a lot of money so that I don’t need to work.