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How do you maintain your oral hygiene?

차진혁/2025-05-15

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My maintain oral hygiene is use a gagrin because gagrin is kill the bad tooth germs. So gagrin is very perfect.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good rest there!

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Jean~~

How do you maintain your oral hygiene?

My maintain oral hygiene is use a gagrin because gagrin is kill the bad tooth germs.

So gagrin is very perfect.

>>> I maintain oral hygiene by gargling because it kills bad germs in my teeth. So, gargling is very effective.

>>> OR: I maintain oral hygiene by gargling because it kills harmful bacteria in my mouth. Gargling is a very effective way to keep my teeth clean