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for women, Why?

권경희/2025-05-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't agree these women's requirements. The election policies of president should not be targeted at specific group like women, old people, and men . We need good policies for our better democratic society. I hope nobody demand policies for only their group.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Lily!
On point, ma'am! No one should take anyone a disdvantage because of gender. They have to see the capability of a person to serve others. 
Aki~

I don't agree these women's requirements.
>>>  I don't agree with these women's requirements.

The election policies of president should not be targeted at specific group like women, old people, and men .
>>>  The election policies of the president should not be targeted at specific groups like women, old people, and men.

We need good policies for our better democratic society.
>>>   We need good policies to make a better democratic society.

I hope nobody demand policies for only their group.
>>>  I hope nobody demands policies for only their group.

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