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Do you think that your country is changing rapidly?

신봉규/2025-05-16

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I think my country is changing rapidly. It seems like the environment is very different now than when I was young. I'm surprised when I go back to the place I lived when I was young.
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Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think my country is changing rapidly. It seems like the environment is very different now than when I was young. I'm surprised when I go back to the place I lived when I was young.  
>> I think my country is changing rapidly. The environment seems very different now compared to when I was young. I’m always surprised when I visit the place where I lived as a child.
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