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Do you prefer cold weather or hot weather? Why?
조유리/2025-05-19
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I prefer hot weather because I enjoy sports like surfing and swimming. and I also love being able to enjoy the bright sunshine, blue skies, and green forests.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Yu Li!
Thank you for your good writing! You explained your reason clearly. Just a small tip: try not to start a sentence with “and.” You can simply continue the sentence or start a new one. Keep up the great work!
~~Teacher Kate
>>I prefer hot weather because I enjoy sports like surfing and swimming. I also love being able to enjoy the bright sunshine, blue skies, and green forests.
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