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Aside from car purchase discounts, what are the typical benefits that regular employees receive?

이승훈/2025-05-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
our company is many benefits to employees. first, our company support 'HANWHWA' resort in all region. so we are save resort fee. second, our company support employees's child university expenses. sure of only two child. third, our company support support some gift certificate when employees's birthday. although not large money, we are some feel good. i think our company have more benifit, but i don't remember now.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Hun!
It's nice to know that your company provides a lot of benefits. I really like that they support employees' children because most parents struggle to pay for university fees. Also, the birthday benefit, even if not big, can make an employee feel really important and special.
- T. Caitlyn 
our company is many benefits to employees.
>> Our company provides many benefits to employees.
first, our company support 'HANWHWA' resort in all region. so we are save resort fee.
>> First, our company supports 'HANWHA' resorts in all regions, so we save on resort fees.
second, our company support employees's child university expenses. sure of only two child.
>> Second, our company supports employees' children's university expenses, but only for two children.
third, our company support support some gift certificate when employees's birthday.
>> Third, our company provides gift certificates for employees' birthdays.
although not large money, we are some feel good.
>> Although the amount is not large, it still makes us feel good.
i think our company have more benifit, but i don't remember now.
>> I think our company has more benefits, but I don't remember them now.
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