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The homework for 21st May.
조윤호/2025-05-21
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q : What three languages would you really like to speak, and why?
A : First one is definitely English because i am working in trade field and i love to travel overseas.
And second one is Japanese because i like Japanese foods, mood, people.
Finally, last one is Spanish because i would like to visit South America in the far future.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Eddy!
Thank you for your good effort! You shared your language choices and reasons clearly. Here’s a small tip: try to use full sentences (like “The first one is...”) and be careful with word forms—for example, use “food” (uncountable) instead of “foods.” You're doing well—keep practicing!
~~Teacher Kate
>>The first one is definitely English because I am working in the trade field and I love to travel overseas.
And second one is Japanese because i like Japanese foods, mood, people.
And second one is Japanese because i like Japanese foods, mood, people.
>>The second one is Japanese because I like Japanese food, culture, and people.
Finally, last one is Spanish because i would like to visit South America in the far future.
Finally, last one is Spanish because i would like to visit South America in the far future.
>>Finally, the last one is Spanish because I would like to visit South America in the distant future.
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