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Describe a friend's personality and why you enjoy spending time with them
권경미/2025-05-23
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
One of my best friends is 미선. She has a warm and cheerful personality.
She's always positive, even in tough situations, and know how to make people laugh.
I enjoy spending time with her because she's a great listener and gives thoughtful advice.
Being around her always lifts my mood.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Judy! I love how you described her, being positive even in tough times is such a rare and amazing quality. Your friendship sounds so genuine. It's awesome that you have someone like her to count on.
-T. Sonny
One of my best friends is 미선.
>>Correct!
She has a warm and cheerful personality.
>>Correct!
She's always positive, even in tough situations, and know how to make people laugh.
She's always positive, even in tough situations, and know how to make people laugh.
>>She's always positive, even in tough situations, and knows how to make people laugh.
I enjoy spending time with her because she's a great listener and gives thoughtful advice.
I enjoy spending time with her because she's a great listener and gives thoughtful advice.
>>Correct!
Being around her always lifts my mood.
Being around her always lifts my mood.
>>Correct!
OR. She’s like a breath of fresh air on a heavy day.
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