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How can companies protect their customers’ data from being hacked?

이진태/2025-06-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It's money problem. Hacking technology has develped continuously. If companies want to protect their data from hacker, they also should progress their protecting system.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello! I'm really pleased you took the time to finish the homework. Your insights and ideas were shared excellently—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


It's money problem.
>> It's a money issue.

Hacking technology has develped continuously.
>> Hacking technology has continued to develop.

If companies want to protect their data from hacker, they also should progress their protecting system.
>> If companies want to protect their data from hackers, they also need to keep improving their security systems.
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