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이유민/2025-06-10

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First, company’s benefits are important to me. There are a lot of kind of benefits like using delicious company restaurant for free or cheaper price and supporting us to study anything to develop ourselves. And I want to use my annual leave anytime that I want to use. If I am allowed to wish so much,I want to work flexible hours.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I can tell that you really love learning.
_T. SHAY^^
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First, company’s benefits are important to me.

>>First, the company's benefits are important to me.
There are a lot of kind of benefits like using delicious company restaurant for free or cheaper price and supporting us to study anything to develop ourselves.

>>There are a lot benefits, such as free meals from the company restaurant/canteen and support for professional development.
And I want to use my annual leave anytime that I want to use.

>>And I want to use my annual leave any time I want to use it.

If I am allowed to wish so much,I want to work flexible hours.

>>If I am allowed to have a request, I want to work flexible hours.