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The Islands of Gunsan

양기연/2025-06-11

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I don't know the differences between the islands in Gunsan because we were in the biggest island, Seonyudo. It is developed as a tourist attraction, so it's road is paved and we drove to every place. On that island, we enjoyed a beautiful sand beach and a pebble beach. Some of us took zipline.Several islands are connected to Gunsan city, but Seonyudo is the most popular.

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Hi, Gi Yean!

Thank you for telling me about Seonyudo. It's actually nice to know that you can travel there by car because the roads are paved, so I think that makes it very convenient for travelers to visit.

- T. Caitlyn

I don't know the differences between the islands in Gunsan because we were in the biggest island, Seonyudo.

>> I don't know the differences between the islands in Gunsan because we were on the biggest island, Seonyudo.

It is developed as a tourist attraction, so its road is paved and we drove to every place.

>> CORRECT

On that island, we enjoyed a beautiful sand beach and a pebble beach.

>> CORRECT

Some of us took zipline.

>> Some of us took a zipline.

Several islands are connected to Gunsan city, but Seonyudo is the most popular.

>> CORRECT