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Thinking back to your own experience, what advice would you offer to someone preparing to graduate?

이진태/2025-06-11

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When I was fresh grauduate, I thought "English don't need anymore for me.", because I worked in accounting team. However, my task changed many times, so now I need English again. I would give an advice to study English contiuously to freshman.

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Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

When I was fresh grauduate, I thought "English don't need anymore for me.", because I worked in accounting team.
However, my task changed many times, so now I need English again.
I would give an advice to study English contiuously to freshman.

>> When I was a fresh graduate, I thought, 'I don't need English anymore,' because I was working in the accounting team. However, my tasks changed many times, and now I need English again. I would advise new graduates to continue studying English consistently.

>> Back when I had just graduated, I thought I didn’t need English anymore because I was working in accounting. But my role kept changing, and now I find myself needing English again. I’d tell any new graduate to keep learning English – you never know when you’ll need it.