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Advantages of working in a big corporation

양기연/2025-06-12

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First, those who are working for a big company don't worry about the future of the company and the security of their employment. And they enjoy various welfare systems. The children whose parent works for a big company can attend schools with the company's scholarship, even university. Above all, the workers get big wage and additional benefits.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Gi Yean!

Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! Even though the competition is very tight in big companies, their benefits and the financial stability they provide still outweigh their disadvantages, so a lot of people still prefer working there.

- T. Caitlyn

First, those who are working for a big company don't worry about the future of the company and the security of their employment.

>> First, those who work for a big company don’t worry about the company’s future or the security of their employment.

And they enjoy various welfare systems.

>> CORRECT

The children whose parent works for a big company can attend school with the company's scholarship, even university.

>> CORRECT

Above all, the workers get big wage and additional benefits.

>> Above all, the workers receive high wages and additional benefits.