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Do its economic strategies impact a country’s global reputation?

이진태/2025-06-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It is true. If some country execute very closed and autocratic economic such as North Korea, they never get economic glory. Because just some group will have every income in one nation. So, free and democratic economy is important.
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~~Teacher Ryka^^

It is true.
>> CORRECT
>> OR This is a valid point

If some country execute very closed and autocratic economic such as North Korea, they never get economic glory.
>> If a country adopts a closed and autocratic economic system, like North Korea, it will never achieve economic prosperity.

Because just some group will have every income in one nation.
>> This is because only a small group controls all the income in the nation.

So, free and democratic economy is important.
>> Therefore, a free and democratic economy is important.
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