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How do you show your appreciation towards someone who is kind or helpful to you?

이지윤/2025-06-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I show my appreciation towards people who are kind or helpful to me in two ways. First, indirect expression of appreciation. If I show my gratitude directly, there are people who are burdened, so I don't say it directly, but show my heart indirectly. For example, they do their hard work for them or take their requests first. Second, it's a direct expression of appreciation, as opposed to the first way. If I show my gratitude indirectly, I show my feelings directly because there are people who don't know well. For example, I can say thank you and write a note directly of write a letter and deliver it to them with a gift that is not burdensome.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! 

Thank you for sharing your answer. You did well in expressing yourself. 
I can totally relate to your answer as well about being direct or indirect depending on the situation or person. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I show my appreciation towards people who are kind or helpful to me in two ways.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I express my gratitude in two ways to those who are kind or helpful to me

First, indirect expression of appreciation.
>> First, I use indirect expressions of appreciation.

If I show my gratitude directly, there are people who are burdened, so I don't say it directly, but show my heart indirectly.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Some people feel burdened when I express gratitude directly, so I prefer to show it indirectly.
>> Or: Because some people feel uncomfortable with direct thanks, I express my feelings in a subtle way.

For example, they do their hard work for them or take their requests first.
>> For example, I might help them with their work or handle their requests first.

Second, it's a direct expression of appreciation, as opposed to the first way.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Second, I use direct expressions of appreciation, unlike the first method.

If I show my gratitude indirectly, I show my feelings directly because there are people who don't know well.
>> If I only express gratitude indirectly, some people may not notice, so I also express it directly.

For example, I can say thank you and write a note directly of write a letter and deliver it to them with a gift that is not burdensome.
>> For example, I can say thank you and write a note directly or write a letter and deliver it to them with a gift that is not burdensome.
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