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Do you think anyone can become a celebrity? Why or why not?

조유리/2025-06-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I do anyone can become a celebrity these days because digital platforms like YouTube and TikTok make it possible for anyone to gain fame and create opportunities easily.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Yu Li!

Thank you for your great work! Your idea is clear and well explained. Just a small tip: don’t forget to include helper verbs like “do think” to make the sentence complete. Keep going—you’re doing well!

~~Teacher Kate

I do anyone can become a celebrity these days because digital platforms like YouTube and TikTok make it possible for anyone to gain fame and create opportunities easily.

>>I do think anyone can become a celebrity these days because digital platforms like YouTube and TikTok make it possible for anyone to gain fame and create opportunities easily.